There is not a single bad Heroine in this game, you better make this a grand huge ultra mega harem, boy. But anyway, Sephiroth looking mc? He is from Russia? I am digging it.

So a Majikoi fanfic haven't seen something like that before and it's pretty good Very few grammatical mistakes overall a Great story if you have extra time give it a Read you won't regret it.

Don't give up on writing, please. You're doing really well. The character design is excellent, the world background is fleshed out and most importantly, you have a great writing quality. Don't give up!

Aight, I never expected I would be able to see a Majikoi fic in Webnovel, a well-written one too. I am a massive fan of Majikoi so this makes me happy. Anyways the only good Majikoi fanfic I've read was in FF.net but it was on hiatus and even then the grammar was not as good as this one so I give props to the author. The story is good and it looks like his system is not the normal Gamer or System so it's not that overpowered. With the system he can obtain some unique martial arts from other worlds which can make him stronger and also unlock and allow him to use ki. Regarding the pairings, I myself love all of the heroines, though my favorite girl is Chris (in which her route in VN is butchered), I have no qualms whether it's a harem or not but I prefer a single pairing, even more so when the partner is Momoyo. In the VN, in Momoyo's route, her main dilemma of not finding someone to battle with all her might is not really solved, so with the MC's capabilities this can be solved which would make the romance of the two more "realistic" -for the lack of better word- since the main conflict of the heroine was resolved. All in all, this story is a great read and have lots of potential. For now I give this a 9/10. I look forward to reading more and I encourage the author to keep up the great work.

Just a try at one of my favorite visual novels. Still not sure whether to get into it full time or just to update it once in a while. Mc looks like Sephiroth from Final Fantasy VII, wearing sunglasses for better visualization.

A pretty good start, sincerely I would like to give it 5.0 stars, but you still need more chapters. That aside, the story is pretty good so far, though it's a shame it can't give you power stones, a story like this really deserves it.

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍

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