Review Detail of Springs_Halo in Affinity:Chaos
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Notice To New Readers! My first few chapters' writing quality is quite bad and can be said to lack creativity, as I was still a newbie at the time, but gets much better as the novel progresses! I can't say my writing quality is the best now, but compared to when I started, it's much better. I know my story isn't the best on the site but there are at least some things to like about it! Hope you stick around! Also, there will be No Harem on this book. The MC will have a single partner and no more than that. Thanks for reading this review, and I hope you stick around with the book to the end.
Affinity:Chaos
Springs_Halo
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I don't really know yet since it hasn't gotten to that stage yet, but I'm sure it'll most likely be at first try. It all depends on the development of the story tho
Deus_Mundum:is the mc gonna succeed in love at first try or is there going to be multiple attempts
He won't spare any female enemies. And yes, compared to the first chapters, the MC is more mature in the later chapters
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the thing I don't understand is why you not just rewrite the beginning? it is something that almost every author has to do and does in traditional publishing. the first version of the beginning of a book is never good enough to get new people to stick with the book. but sadly most authors on wn ignore their bad first chapters. and I don't just mean tweaking some words but deleting the first few chapters and writing them new until they match up again with the unchanged chapters.
Okay, I'll try to free up some time and work more on the earlier chapters. I see all your comments and tbh, I've learned a thing or two from them which increased my writing quality overall. So thanks for the advises, most of what you're complaining about is implemented on the latter chapters. I'll edit the earlier ones as soon as I can
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First of all, I'm steadily fixing the early chapters up now, if you're using the app you'll see some of the early chapters show a few days ago. That's because I've recently edited them, also, this takes up a lot of time, it's not as easy as it sounds, trust me, I was also a reader like you, and I still am. I also have to do daily uploads while also trying to keep up with my everyday life. I'm working on the early chapters, but I'm not there yet, hence I still left this notice just to inform new readers. Thanks for the advice tho, hopefully you check out the story.
AndromedaAirlines:Instead of writing a caution like this, just spend a little time and fix them up. Your first chapters are by far the most important in your story when it comes to getting readers. Doing it the way you are just shows laziness and a lack of care for your own work.
Yeah, I write too and that's part of why I understand how incredibly important these beginning chapters are. In my opinion, rather delay the new chapters a little bit and spend the effort making the beginning readable. Different people will have different priorities and goals though, just giving my view of how you came off here.
Springs_Halo:First of all, I'm steadily fixing the early chapters up now, if you're using the app you'll see some of the early chapters show a few days ago. That's because I've recently edited them, also, this takes up a lot of time, it's not as easy as it sounds, trust me, I was also a reader like you, and I still am. I also have to do daily uploads while also trying to keep up with my everyday life. I'm working on the early chapters, but I'm not there yet, hence I still left this notice just to inform new readers. Thanks for the advice tho, hopefully you check out the story.
AndromedaAirlines:Yeah, I write too and that's part of why I understand how incredibly important these beginning chapters are. In my opinion, rather delay the new chapters a little bit and spend the effort making the beginning readable. Different people will have different priorities and goals though, just giving my view of how you came off here.
