Notice To New Readers! My first few chapters' writing quality is quite bad and can be said to lack creativity, as I was still a newbie at the time, but gets much better as the novel progresses! I can't say my writing quality is the best now, but compared to when I started, it's much better. I know my story isn't the best on the site but there are at least some things to like about it! Hope you stick around! Also, there will be No Harem on this book. The MC will have a single partner and no more than that. Thanks for reading this review, and I hope you stick around with the book to the end.

i apologize to the author for almost quitting this book at around chapter 230 and say that this is my 2nd favorite book on here right now and plan on rereading it for years to come after it's finished

24 chapters in and I'm already adding this novel to my favorites. so far this novel has an interesting main character with the supporting characters that have been shown (mainly family) having a vast room for future development. the world itself seems really interesting. Though it is easy to mistake the world for a modern one, the author has specified that it is medieval era style world due to the lack of specifics in the daily life. said lack of specifics however does (in my opinion) enhance the flow of the novel and allow the reader to use more imagination to set the story in their own minds.

All around this story is average. It's a cultivation novel with typical cliches and a few typical features, but I haven't seen anything new yet. Sometimes that's good, because you just want to have an enjoyable read, and indeed some people love how "fast paced" the novel is, but not me. The grammar is near flawless but the author's command of the English language is lacking. Moments seem to drag on forever and the writing seems to circle itself in a repetitive manner. These things happen mostly due to a bland, unvarried word choice. For readers like me, with higher expectations, I'm simply bored from reading it. Plot-wise the story is average too. The world building doesnt seem very deep and there aren't very many characters, as if the author doesnt want to put the work in to making a large world. The time period and cultures aren't established (with either the use of objects, technology, or references). Nothing. Furthermore the magic system is lacking. Even by chapter 30, when the MC has broken through two planes, I still dont know what the planes are, what the consequences of cultivating improperly are, what the elements are, or how the elements are used (in combat) ect. Even by chapter 30 there has been only one fight and it was totally lackluster. Missed opportunity for demonstrating the magic system in action. Over all I would say average. I am still very impressed with the grammar, but there's unfortunately no character or charm to the writing. So even though it isn't distracting from the story, it is still detracting. Author should go back to rework scenes and actively use synonyms. Every adjective in a chapter should be unique. Every verb should be specifically chosen to best describe an action.

Hello, author here. If you're reading this, then I do hope you try out the book. I cannot say the early chapters are my best work, but it is my first book so do give it a try if you are willing to give this book a chance and allow me to entertain you.

I feel like this could be a gem if the author plays his cards right. Characters are fun, stability of updates is great, but the writing can be chaotic sometimes to the point that I don't really know what's going on. Especially during POV changes. But hey nobody is perfect, right? So dear author I would recommend getting an editor because this novel has a LOT of potential and chaotic writing may scare potential readers away. Much love! ♥

Very basic beginning, but that's fine. What isn't is the Gary Sue MC who has no emotional baggage despite being traumatized at 12, constantly bullied, and oh, trains with no goal or motivation, not even sadness or to escape from his predicament. You know the guy who at 15 looks all muscular because his parent casually mentioned excercise once, the guy who never hurts anyone because "good guy is lawful good, not hormonal teenager," and of course, is always upbeat.

Well, I am a fan of Cultivation novels; So, I just got struck into it as I saw its genre♥️ To be honest- The plot the novel bears has great potential and intriguity😍 I think the novel gets more and more love from the readers- and, kindly re-visit and re-edit your initial Chapters for errors✌️You may find some more ideas while reading them again!

The story is good so far.. Writing Quality: There isn't much to complain about. Character Design: It's okay imo World Background: It's good also. Update Stability: 1 chapter a day. Story Development: Going at a good pace currently, again imo My Rating: 4 stars, but I'll give the author a 4.6 stars rating to encourage him. Recommendation: I'll advise you read it as it is a great story imo. Also if the first chapters are disappointing to you, I suggest you read till about chapter 40 before you decide if you want to drop it. The first chapters aren't really that good imo, but the book started getting better for me at about chapter 30 or so. Also there are some places I personally feel the author didn't execute properly, but since he's new, I'll give him the benefit of the doubt. If you check my write up you'll see I put imo in most of the places because they are my opinions. My thoughts are different from what you'll think about the book. Read it... Only then will you know if it's good.