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2023-01-19 18:48

MAJOR SPOILER AHEAD. READ AT YOUR OWN RISK⚠️ How should I put this? It started really good and I can also say that somehow, it's still better as it progresses but maybe it's not the ending or plot twist that I've been expecting so my enthusiasm at the latter part of the story dropped and I'm kinda disappointed with it. Well, first of all, let's talk about the FL. She's OP (as expected) but she also has flaws. She's the domineering but cute type. Looking harmless but dangerous. I like her character design tbh. Aa for the ML, well, I can't say that much since he's the typical ML. Domineering, handsome, rich, powerful and such. I can't criticize him for dating a minor (since SYY was only 17 that time they met) because it was SYY who chased after him. He is possessive but not obvious. Honestly, I feel that his character design isn't that much compared to SYY. Next is the supporting characters. They are funny and sweet, especially the members of class 3-3. I also like that there's a lot of friends who's supporting SYY. I also like the members of the 12 guards of the Huo family, especially Huo Jiu for some reason. However, I can't really like Song Wenchuan that much though. After all, he claimed that he loves his sister (the OG SYY) and yet, for almost 18 years that she's been bullied, where was he? Now, about the harem— I mean, male species that fell for SYY's charm, I only like Shen Xun among them. As for Huo Ningxi? It's too late. My first impression is really bad for him and that goes on as the story progresses. Well, he's quite redeemable at the end but still meh. And lastly, just like what I've mentioned at the start, the ending is kinda flop? The plot twist is really confusing and not well explained. So what's with the 2 worlds? What with SYY's childhood trauma? What's with Father Nolan? Why does it seem that Zhou Manli remembers it? What's with the altar and sacrifices? SYY thought she transmigrated into a novel but with the plot twist suddenly mentioned, it seems like it isn't the case? So yeah. I gave 2 stars for the world background since it's kinda confusing. But maybe it's also a plus point for it's uniqueness since SYY was transmigrated into a new world but then her family from her previous world managed to follow her. Anyway, I still find it a little confusing even now. I wish there's explanation for all my questions. Still, excluding the confusing plot twist, it's a 8.5/10 for me. The story is interesting but with a lot of similar plots and genres, it isn't very much unique and refreshing. However it's still a worth read among the stories with similar plots.

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