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MagicalCookie
MagicalCookieLv133yr
2021-02-13 04:00

I couldn't rlly continue this after chapter 5...I don't rlly like the relationship between the FL and the ML. idk if there's just a huge misunderstanding or if she did actually get with someone else but i'm not liking it and i'm not continuing this. there's also seeming to be tragedy somehow in the future?? maybe i could deal with some tragedy but i can't with the relationship between them rn...even if any misunderstanding gets cleared up in the future i'm not going to rlly want to hear abt it.

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MagicalCookie
MagicalCookieLv13

SPOILER! ok so she is apparently pregnant w someone else's child. irl, i understand troubles w relationships and how people can still happily end up together even if the people were in love with someone else be4 or even pregnant w someone else's child be4. but in novels and fiction? i just can't accept that a FL and ML would be together like that becuz in fiction, i always have this different view of wanting their love to be pure and perfect (ofc even if there were many obstacles in the way) but just not where they had deeper relationships emotionally and physically with other characters. idk if this is just me but...yeaa

Sonuvapotatoe
SonuvapotatoeLv3

It’s not just u... I always want the fl and ml to be each other’s first in everything (well except love) I find it hard to accept the thought of them having kissed someone before each other or had seggs with someone apart from each other (it’s different when it comes to vampire stories cause vampires r lustful). I prefer them to have an innocent pure love

MagicalCookie:SPOILER! ok so she is apparently pregnant w someone else's child. irl, i understand troubles w relationships and how people can still happily end up together even if the people were in love with someone else be4 or even pregnant w someone else's child be4. but in novels and fiction? i just can't accept that a FL and ML would be together like that becuz in fiction, i always have this different view of wanting their love to be pure and perfect (ofc even if there were many obstacles in the way) but just not where they had deeper relationships emotionally and physically with other characters. idk if this is just me but...yeaa
catlady_bree123
catlady_bree123Lv14

I only got 3 chapters in and already couldn't handle their weird relationship. I came to the reviews hoping that maybe things would get better, but after reading your review I decided I'm not gonna waste my time and emotions on it. thank you!

obsessed_reader4
obsessed_reader4Lv4

k when I read the start I was also like I can't read any more I wanted to stop bit It continued anyways since I was jobless and bored the story directly skips from her pregnancy to their childhood till it goes on about till 12ch or so then directly to when the FL was 18 and it really is hilarious how she is so rebellious. the novel started wid a slight suspense which I couldn't stomach in the beginning but com on we don't have to be so narrow minded in this generation its like a divorced woman can't get married but a guy can he can have mistresses outside but still get married we r being too prejudiced against woman.

MagicalCookie
MagicalCookieLv13

ik that my perspective isnt good and all but its just how it comes to me... like i said, irl relationships r a lot more complicated and thats reality for you. but in fiction this is where i can read abt happy endings and stories that r so beautiful and perfect that u wouldnt get them in reality. so in fiction, i would prefer the relationship between the fl and ml to be perfect ofc minus the troubles and ladadada but its just where i can have like giddy and happy feelings instead of where one was attached to another person deeply and emotionally before or that they had a child with someone else before 🤷🏻‍♀️

obsessed_reader4:k when I read the start I was also like I can't read any more I wanted to stop bit It continued anyways since I was jobless and bored the story directly skips from her pregnancy to their childhood till it goes on about till 12ch or so then directly to when the FL was 18 and it really is hilarious how she is so rebellious. the novel started wid a slight suspense which I couldn't stomach in the beginning but com on we don't have to be so narrow minded in this generation its like a divorced woman can't get married but a guy can he can have mistresses outside but still get married we r being too prejudiced against woman.
little_bee232
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