Review Detail of CrimsonLily in The Queen Wicked Deeds

im giving everything a five star except for story development... im on ch 18 rn.. im not sure if its just me but the transition of this novel is so all over the place.. my smol brain cant follow, too many events happening, too many characters introduced, i dont even know what happened after what, or is it a flashback? i feel every scenario is open ended.. the author just decides to go to another scenario.. idk im sorry, ive read so many novels but this is one of those novels that are just hard for me to digest