Review Detail of Dev_013 in Darius Supreme

men why r u wasting ur telent like this author.....u have writing skills nd still whts up with this 30+ chps with just info dumps.... and that slow progress....your describing is very nice but dude u just post 30 chaps just to for this .... --} mc is in fantasy word cause of goddess which gave him system yeah ok..than he goes through forest to town nd he met some noble retired soldier family in which there's two brats...men u just use 30 just for this nd wht abt lasts 3 chaps it's like u just describe only the one skill or ablilty how points are used or wht is mc class lol we knew that already... well even with low IQ level can think of restrictions of the skills so pls don't decribe it like for 3 chaps... it's like when I open my library nd see tht whoaa there's 3 chaps updated nd when read through it wht I got is just description of the ability that I already know nd understand...man I don't know laguh or cry... pls stp wasting describing everything...u could have just surmise this 30 chaps into 5 or 6 but don't drag it...u have skills so don't waste it to draging it will drp the quality of the novel...