I don't know how this got a high rating since the grammar is just awful, the author is lazy and didn't even bother fixing it...you will be confused of the conversations of the characters because the pronouns are all over the place... The mc is also unnecessarily provoking every human he interacts with, he will remind you of young masters in cultivation novels/manhua... The plot is meh, author don't know how to make the story flow properly, The mc is so op and has no clear antagonist so you'll start to wonder what's the point of reading this story since everything is going the MC's way, it's not even entertaining like OPM And then there's one where i drew the line, the mc despite having unlimited women who will sleep with him, fcked a 12 year old child, I suggest reading this if you absolutely had nothing left to read
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(Google translator) First of all, thanks for your review. Second, the grammar is obviously horrible since it is translated from google translator, it shows that you have not read the comments or the synopsis and also you say that I am lazy? Friend, I just wrote this novel a little over 1 week ago, with four chapters a day, do you think I have time to correct something in a language I don't understand? Third, "The mc is also unnecessarily provoking every human he interacts with, he will remind you of young masters in cultivation novels / manhua ..." all I have to say is "wtf", it shows that you are not reading the same novel that publishes since at no time the protagonist is unnecessarily provoking other people. Fourth, the story is not flowing properly because it is the slow type, so I don't know what you expected to happen and there won't be a main antagonist or anything. And about sleeping with a 12-year-old girl, I admit that, so anyone reading this comment, you better not go on with the novel if you don't like that, anyway, it wasn't rape or anything.
I didn't read the sino**is but only looked at the tags, but holy shit, this was translated by google translator, the story in its original language must be amazing then !
BlockNejime:(Google translator) First of all, thanks for your review. Second, the grammar is obviously horrible since it is translated from google translator, it shows that you have not read the comments or the synopsis and also you say that I am lazy? Friend, I just wrote this novel a little over 1 week ago, with four chapters a day, do you think I have time to correct something in a language I don't understand? Third, "The mc is also unnecessarily provoking every human he interacts with, he will remind you of young masters in cultivation novels / manhua ..." all I have to say is "wtf", it shows that you are not reading the same novel that publishes since at no time the protagonist is unnecessarily provoking other people. Fourth, the story is not flowing properly because it is the slow type, so I don't know what you expected to happen and there won't be a main antagonist or anything. And about sleeping with a 12-year-old girl, I admit that, so anyone reading this comment, you better not go on with the novel if you don't like that, anyway, it wasn't rape or anything.
do you really think the fact that you used Google translate or somesht will exempt your story from being criticized for having an awful grammar, and at the very least fix the pronouns, to your other rebuttal i can't be bothered to address it peace out mr pedoauthor
