Review Detail of Mordenkian in The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage

This book is supremely well written. For someone who has trouble writing action scenes, your book is much better then many books on this platform. Many things like grammar and spelling are done very well. One thing would be some logic holes, but they are very small, and don't affect the story. I really hope that you are able to continue updating and adding new chapters, as the first 20 are really great.