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DreamCrusher101
DreamCrusher101Lv53yrDreamCrusher101

Its not my cop of tea i am not saying its not good you should try it its just some threw me off this story because the mc is a reincarnated person so because of this the story obtain the sense of uniqueness because just like a said the mc is unique because he is reincarnated he is not like the other member of his group chat that is a original character but when you add an antoganist that is also an reincarnated person the sense of uniqueness because now that other people can also reincarnate the mc lose his sense of being special because their are many of them and because of this the reason he is winning is bacause of plot armor or he is just lucky because he is the mc of the story and even if the enemy has an op ability that should be op suddenly the mc will gain something because he is lucky and this is also the reason the the sense of training hard lose because of the plot armor enemy will always get lousy ability and th mc always get the good one it is just unfair because the enemy and the mc have the same privilige they are both system user or they know the plot because of this the novel just become a story the mc win becuae of the privilege of being an mc

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Peacemaker2_at_
Peacemaker2_at_Lv12Peacemaker2_at_

And why should I care about your Opinion. All I want to do is give him a tip for future reviews as well as make him aware that with better punctuation more people will read his text, Cause I was really about to quit trying to find out where one sentence ends.

Precheur:At this game you could also have written nothing, no one would care.
Lasagnaaa
LasagnaaaLv5Lasagnaaa

you do realize that blackbeard will be killed in a few chapters right? what antagonist? this is only so that we get more content and for some character development. **** you're on about.

Peacemaker2_at_
Peacemaker2_at_Lv12Peacemaker2_at_

First of all, your punctuation is absolutely nonexistent, and don't even think of arguing back when you don't even have a single dot in your Text Wall. Second of all, don't judge a story too quickly. Not every author is the same. You seem to lump all the people together, but it may just be me. Next to that, having several transmigrated OCs gives the story a uniqueness cause nobody else dares to do that shit. It also highlights the MC, who doesn't give up. The cases you listed are probably just from bad authors. Not everyone is too lazy to make a good character or good have good character development. I give you a warning. The next time you write a review, you should think some more before complaining and writing a review. Think about everything first, and don't lump everyone together like this. But what can I complain about? This is typical for WN. Most people here are just Horny Teens, Uncultured swines, or just dumb fucks. Most of the top stories have harems and the like, so I understand you for reacting like that, but I still ask you to think about it more this time.

A_reader_for_fun
A_reader_for_funLv12A_reader_for_fun

No one dares to do because nobody likes it

Peacemaker2_at_:First of all, your punctuation is absolutely nonexistent, and don't even think of arguing back when you don't even have a single dot in your Text Wall. Second of all, don't judge a story too quickly. Not every author is the same. You seem to lump all the people together, but it may just be me. Next to that, having several transmigrated OCs gives the story a uniqueness cause nobody else dares to do that shit. It also highlights the MC, who doesn't give up. The cases you listed are probably just from bad authors. Not everyone is too lazy to make a good character or good have good character development. I give you a warning. The next time you write a review, you should think some more before complaining and writing a review. Think about everything first, and don't lump everyone together like this. But what can I complain about? This is typical for WN. Most people here are just Horny Teens, Uncultured swines, or just dumb fucks. Most of the top stories have harems and the like, so I understand you for reacting like that, but I still ask you to think about it more this time.
noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv13noobageddon_

🤦🏻‍♂️🤦🏻‍♂️ thers literally many spam 5 star review in this ff and you ask a person who write a review with sense to think? Lol why dont you say it to those spammers? Also he already said that this ff is not for him, but other might like it. Then proceed to discribe what he dont like about the novel that others might like.

Peacemaker2_at_:First of all, your punctuation is absolutely nonexistent, and don't even think of arguing back when you don't even have a single dot in your Text Wall. Second of all, don't judge a story too quickly. Not every author is the same. You seem to lump all the people together, but it may just be me. Next to that, having several transmigrated OCs gives the story a uniqueness cause nobody else dares to do that shit. It also highlights the MC, who doesn't give up. The cases you listed are probably just from bad authors. Not everyone is too lazy to make a good character or good have good character development. I give you a warning. The next time you write a review, you should think some more before complaining and writing a review. Think about everything first, and don't lump everyone together like this. But what can I complain about? This is typical for WN. Most people here are just Horny Teens, Uncultured swines, or just dumb fucks. Most of the top stories have harems and the like, so I understand you for reacting like that, but I still ask you to think about it more this time.
Peacemaker2_at_
Peacemaker2_at_Lv12Peacemaker2_at_

lol

A_reader_for_fun:No one dares to do because nobody likes it
Peacemaker2_at_
Peacemaker2_at_Lv12Peacemaker2_at_

I see revies of appreciation and some spam ones like the Albedo ones. I also never said anything about him saying it's not for his cup of tea. I first told him about his more than horrible punctuation. Second, I commented that he seemed to generalize this fanfiction and others without waiting and giving it a try. I don't see where your problem is. If you could elaborate on your problem with me, that would help in resolving it. I would appreciate that.

noobageddon_:🤦🏻‍♂️🤦🏻‍♂️ thers literally many spam 5 star review in this ff and you ask a person who write a review with sense to think? Lol why dont you say it to those spammers? Also he already said that this ff is not for him, but other might like it. Then proceed to discribe what he dont like about the novel that others might like.
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CodezL
CodezLLv4CodezL

I did not like that he lied to the other members of the chat to make them believe that he is strong, besides that there are stupid parts such as when a tear falls saying that he is no longer alone, just because members appeared in the chat, I got goose bumps.

FennrrirX
FennrrirXLv5FennrrirX

Stop with all the Hate, the Guy just doesn't like the novel and nothing you say is going to make him like it. So what if his punctuation is terrible? Have you considered that Inglish might not be his first language? Everyone has the right to an opinion and you shouldn't start attacking people for expressing theirs.

Peacemaker2_at_:I see revies of appreciation and some spam ones like the Albedo ones. I also never said anything about him saying it's not for his cup of tea. I first told him about his more than horrible punctuation. Second, I commented that he seemed to generalize this fanfiction and others without waiting and giving it a try. I don't see where your problem is. If you could elaborate on your problem with me, that would help in resolving it. I would appreciate that.
Sondre
SondreLv13Sondre

is there a language that does not use punctuation? or anything to denote the end of a sentence? cus while I agree with both the OP and Peacesomething, it was hard to read that wall of text. I am a stalwart believer in; if you don't like it, don't read it. likes and dislikes are mostly subjective anyways.

FennrrirX:Stop with all the Hate, the Guy just doesn't like the novel and nothing you say is going to make him like it. So what if his punctuation is terrible? Have you considered that Inglish might not be his first language? Everyone has the right to an opinion and you shouldn't start attacking people for expressing theirs.
Peacemaker2_at_
Peacemaker2_at_Lv12Peacemaker2_at_

I did not put a single bit of hate in that comment.

FennrrirX:Stop with all the Hate, the Guy just doesn't like the novel and nothing you say is going to make him like it. So what if his punctuation is terrible? Have you considered that Inglish might not be his first language? Everyone has the right to an opinion and you shouldn't start attacking people for expressing theirs.
Peacemaker2_at_
Peacemaker2_at_Lv12Peacemaker2_at_

True, if you don't like it, don't read it.

Sondre:is there a language that does not use punctuation? or anything to denote the end of a sentence? cus while I agree with both the OP and Peacesomething, it was hard to read that wall of text. I am a stalwart believer in; if you don't like it, don't read it. likes and dislikes are mostly subjective anyways.
Peacemaker2_at_
Peacemaker2_at_Lv12Peacemaker2_at_

English ain't my first language, either. And I never tried to change his opinion. I just told him some facts that I could read out of his review. He could have also written nothing. I don't care.

FennrrirX:Stop with all the Hate, the Guy just doesn't like the novel and nothing you say is going to make him like it. So what if his punctuation is terrible? Have you considered that Inglish might not be his first language? Everyone has the right to an opinion and you shouldn't start attacking people for expressing theirs.
CodezL
CodezLLv4CodezL

But if it happened once, it can happen again, and I also don't like the fact that he has lied to everyone, making them believe that he is the strongest of all.

Lasagnaaa:you do realize that blackbeard will be killed in a few chapters right? what antagonist? this is only so that we get more content and for some character development. **** you're on about.
Precheur
PrecheurLv5Precheur

At this game you could also have written nothing, no one would care.

Peacemaker2_at_:English ain't my first language, either. And I never tried to change his opinion. I just told him some facts that I could read out of his review. He could have also written nothing. I don't care.
Man_of_culture
Man_of_cultureLv4Man_of_culture

wow chill dude... Comments are meant to be for readers to tell their opinions...

Peacemaker2_at_:First of all, your punctuation is absolutely nonexistent, and don't even think of arguing back when you don't even have a single dot in your Text Wall. Second of all, don't judge a story too quickly. Not every author is the same. You seem to lump all the people together, but it may just be me. Next to that, having several transmigrated OCs gives the story a uniqueness cause nobody else dares to do that shit. It also highlights the MC, who doesn't give up. The cases you listed are probably just from bad authors. Not everyone is too lazy to make a good character or good have good character development. I give you a warning. The next time you write a review, you should think some more before complaining and writing a review. Think about everything first, and don't lump everyone together like this. But what can I complain about? This is typical for WN. Most people here are just Horny Teens, Uncultured swines, or just dumb fucks. Most of the top stories have harems and the like, so I understand you for reacting like that, but I still ask you to think about it more this time.
Peacemaker2_at_
Peacemaker2_at_Lv12Peacemaker2_at_

This is a review, and as I said, I have nothing against him. I am just stating facts.

Man_of_culture:wow chill dude... Comments are meant to be for readers to tell their opinions...
Door_kun
Door_kunLv4Door_kun

Yeah you really should change your username by then, doesn't really suit you.

Peacemaker2_at_:English ain't my first language, either. And I never tried to change his opinion. I just told him some facts that I could read out of his review. He could have also written nothing. I don't care.