Review Detail of YoungMasterAJ in TRUNCATED10002

This is a review on request. Not a review swap. I am not an author. Usually I would need at least 15-20 chapters for review, however, I am making an exception for this. Writing Quality: The Writing Quality has improved with the repeated revamps that the author has done. Have to appreciate the effort. Stability of Updates: Updates are ok, considering a new author is working on 5 novels simultaneously. Story Development: After the revamp, the story development has improved a lot. Character Design: Character design has improved quite a lot with the revamp. The added 'List of Characters' in the Auxiliary Volume is a great addendum. World Background: The world background which was not in the focus earlier has become apparent in the first chapter itself. This is great effort and needs applause.