Review Detail of DeathsWork in oath of blood

to everyone that's reading I want you to know that this is my first time writing my own novel and everything in my mind for this plot is in place it might not seem like it but I promise it will get better I plan on making 2 chapters a day and I welcome your criticism that help me make it better for those plan to stick it out your in for a surprise for the that's passing by have fun please show love