the only thing i hate about this is the very slow paced story the other thing is great!, again the only thing that tick me off here is the bery very slow progress in story i am like 50 something chapter he is stil a slave for god sake, anyway that's all, if you can tolerate a very slow paced story this is for you if not then at least try a 10 or 20 chapter cuz this was a slow story oh well,
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LIKEWell thanks for the review ( still an early review since there's more to the story) You are also very close to the end of Vol 1 (3-5 chapters) After that you will enter Vol 2 which will feel entirely different.(come back with an additional comment after reading everything I uploaded thus far.) What I mean by that? You will see the story progressing faster (fast-pace) yet I have to say this, the story main tag is Dark and Kingdom Building, to have KB u need to go slow with your pace in order to set everything up in a manner that fits the narrative. You will also understand why Vol 1 is so slow after reading Vol 2, to explain it to you, I've set things from Vol 1 that would make an smoother transition to Vol2
ye I'll change my review later, cuz i can't read straight the whole novel there are many school works and all, so yeah after i read the all available chap i change this into a more detailed review so sorry if i can't give a proper review yet.
Vostarian:Well thanks for the review ( still an early review since there's more to the story) You are also very close to the end of Vol 1 (3-5 chapters) After that you will enter Vol 2 which will feel entirely different.(come back with an additional comment after reading everything I uploaded thus far.) What I mean by that? You will see the story progressing faster (fast-pace) yet I have to say this, the story main tag is Dark and Kingdom Building, to have KB u need to go slow with your pace in order to set everything up in a manner that fits the narrative. You will also understand why Vol 1 is so slow after reading Vol 2, to explain it to you, I've set things from Vol 1 that would make an smoother transition to Vol2
It is fine, take your time. But indeed, you should read everything, especially if you managed to survive the slow pace of Vol 1, I assure you, Vol 2 will be a darling =)) With a slower story, you should expect things to progress in a linear manner (action-wise and progress wise and a lot of plots developed from advance)
KING_IN_YELLOW:ye I'll change my review later, cuz i can't read straight the whole novel there are many school works and all, so yeah after i read the all available chap i change this into a more detailed review so sorry if i can't give a proper review yet.image