Review Detail of WebReaderPub in One Piece: Blood Unleashed [Revamped - in the synopsis]

Writing quality: there is no bad point here i haven't found any problem of grammar. story development: the story is intersting cause rather than being centered on the exploration like others fanfic or the original. it is a kingdom building where MC try to make the condition of his kingdom better. The first volume speak of him working in the mines as a slave, the second will be about MC and the kingdom and from what author said in the third MC will leave for the sea. character design: the MC is cruel with his enemy, but also kind hearted with innocent people and make friends with people. he is openminded and he is educated, no trash MC who start conflict from nothing just for nothing. Other character are also well explained and two of MC friend from th start will even have some chapters that explain how they are doing in the marine. You can find immages of them on discord. Updating stability: there is practicaly a chapter every day and sometimes bonus chapters too. The author is also very active on answering comments and om discord. world background: the world of one piece, but there is a lot of original parts in fact the whole starting kingdom is original, the story about it will be also original and intersting. it is about fight for power between noble and royal family. the part about MC two friend who join the marine is also intersting since they train with characters like smoker, hina, ina, isuka and draw. for the timeline MC is 6 years older than luffy. MC has neither cheats nor knoledge of one piece, but only memories of his past life and a power he gained by dying and he isn't op to the point of being able to do what he want from the start, but more like a genius who is learning and training to become stronger. for those who are curious of sofiya ( the original female target) she is beautifull and her character is very good. the story may appear slow, but it is very good and tough in the first volume he sometimes lost himself in dialogue he resolved this in the second volume. i higly recomend this fanfic wich is well done and cured.