Review Detail of DarthVegito in One Piece: Blood Unleashed [Revamped - in the synopsis]
Review detail
Was expecting a better fanfic but all you get is Vlad the impaler going to a different world but is now a child slave who guards and the people who own him let him talk nonstop and the story is “world building” but its just boring dragged out chapter by chapter. Not a fan of slave fics especially child slaves but thats apparently the first arc and the fact that his name is Vlad but keeps calling himself and telling people to call him something else is just cringe. His name is Vlad the impaler its iconic why change it..... story is a waste of time so far idk if it gets better once it is actually one piece and not just slave fic but i guess we’ll see
One Piece: Blood Unleashed [Revamped - in the synopsis]
Vostarian
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Also if he does anything that will help people like killing the guards or slavers even the slaves will start running yelling demon or monster.... the guards said that “we have to kill this demon before he can grow” what a wuxia cultivation novel cliche. It had been a masosve waste of time reading this
So this is your problem, the name? Damn how stupid some readers can be? Just now I realized that there are many idiots like you that are stuck on the name thing. You're not reading the novel for the character in his essence, but just a stupid name? Have you seen the tags kid? It says dark, you should expect a dark depiction of our reality and instead your whinning around that the story is boring and doesn't make sense for MC to call himself to another name. Let me ask you? Do you know MC by the name or the fact that he ****ed the Ottomans by impaling like 20k people? (If you do so for this, it means you know him for his character dumbass) Vlad the Impaler? If I ask you what's his real name you wouldn't even know, you didn't even get to find the reason he sticks with the new identity. This explains a lot to me, I'll let your stupid review for a bit to see if you got any new facts to tell me about how stupid you are. I'm a nice guy with people that can think, as for retards like you? Keke, sure.
Wow you are extremely insecure about this fic huh? The name is a big part of who his character is lol also the fact that you drag out everything over chapters and you finally get a poor review so you just have a mental breakdown? My god you shouldnt post stories for the public of you cant take any type of criticism lol what are you 9? Grow up
Vostarian:So this is your problem, the name? Damn how stupid some readers can be? Just now I realized that there are many idiots like you that are stuck on the name thing. You're not reading the novel for the character in his essence, but just a stupid name? Have you seen the tags kid? It says dark, you should expect a dark depiction of our reality and instead your whinning around that the story is boring and doesn't make sense for MC to call himself to another name. Let me ask you? Do you know MC by the name or the fact that he ****ed the Ottomans by impaling like 20k people? (If you do so for this, it means you know him for his character dumbass) Vlad the Impaler? If I ask you what's his real name you wouldn't even know, you didn't even get to find the reason he sticks with the new identity. This explains a lot to me, I'll let your stupid review for a bit to see if you got any new facts to tell me about how stupid you are. I'm a nice guy with people that can think, as for retards like you? Keke, sure.
Also I do know Vlad III Dracula since I did a project on him when i was in middle school lol nice try tho kid.
Vostarian:So this is your problem, the name? Damn how stupid some readers can be? Just now I realized that there are many idiots like you that are stuck on the name thing. You're not reading the novel for the character in his essence, but just a stupid name? Have you seen the tags kid? It says dark, you should expect a dark depiction of our reality and instead your whinning around that the story is boring and doesn't make sense for MC to call himself to another name. Let me ask you? Do you know MC by the name or the fact that he ****ed the Ottomans by impaling like 20k people? (If you do so for this, it means you know him for his character dumbass) Vlad the Impaler? If I ask you what's his real name you wouldn't even know, you didn't even get to find the reason he sticks with the new identity. This explains a lot to me, I'll let your stupid review for a bit to see if you got any new facts to tell me about how stupid you are. I'm a nice guy with people that can think, as for retards like you? Keke, sure.
You should try to write a story, you talk big and like to comment on other people stuff. Come show the authors you insulted their creations, how good you are trash. All is talk until you get to write something. I despise your type, full talk while being narrow minded. Look at him saying "mental breakdown". Sigh, poor guy, you should even keep reading light novels around here. You just a sad person that can't appreciate someone's work. As for me, I'm quite the ok guy, doing fine thanks for asking. Talking with a dumbass in some comments that I'll soon delete because is just toxic talk. You didn't come with any facts, but only stuck with that moronic mindset that you have about what a novel should look like.
DarthVegito:Wow you are extremely insecure about this fic huh? The name is a big part of who his character is lol also the fact that you drag out everything over chapters and you finally get a poor review so you just have a mental breakdown? My god you shouldnt post stories for the public of you cant take any type of criticism lol what are you 9? Grow up
So someone who enjoys watching movies and then reviews and rates said movies for whatever reason.. should just never do it because they havent or wont make their own movie? Same concept and wow what a dumb idea to think thats how life works. Dont write something for public use if you cant take anything. You wont last in the real world with this type of mindset. Hope you can grow up a bit and wont get upset when someone dislikes something of yours. Goodluck
Vostarian:You should try to write a story, you talk big and like to comment on other people stuff. Come show the authors you insulted their creations, how good you are trash. All is talk until you get to write something. I despise your type, full talk while being narrow minded. Look at him saying "mental breakdown". Sigh, poor guy, you should even keep reading light novels around here. You just a sad person that can't appreciate someone's work. As for me, I'm quite the ok guy, doing fine thanks for asking. Talking with a dumbass in some comments that I'll soon delete because is just toxic talk. You didn't come with any facts, but only stuck with that moronic mindset that you have about what a novel should look like.
I disagree with you saying the story is boring, I mean sure your right about this story having less "world building", but I think the character building makes up for that. Besides he's still a child slave, so in order for there to be a "world building setting" first he's got to get freed. Also may I ask, what made you turn off from this story the most? Was it the protagonist being a child slave?
Hey bro, how have you been? I'm fine, you don't have to ask me that. I've been remembering the fact that you really disliked my story, and our good old arguments. Yep, it was fine. It also entered in my attention your views on one of my pal's books. Tsk tsk So here I come, do a suggestion, in case you're missing some one piece fanfic. About the fact that the story has been reworked. Go on try it for yourself, see if the MC is as bad as you thoughts, or if his choices are still "commendable". There's also more dark stuff just for you pall. Ahem, I'm looking forward, again for your 1-star review, but this time let's make it more enjoyable between us, bring some actually constructive things on the table, reasons for hating certain things or what not. Yours truly Morpheus.
DarthVegito:Also I do know Vlad III Dracula since I did a project on him when i was in middle school lol nice try tho kid.
Hey, great to see you defending the story. How have you been? Good? Are you still continuing reading on my story? Also, if you're still going with the story, what's your thoughts on this new version of mine? Sigh, if you're asking me why it took me so much to notice this, I haven't checked that much this part. It's like you'll search on the deep web, on some disgusting **** that shows up in your face. Hope you understand me. Yours truly Morpheus.
TrickY107:I disagree with you saying the story is boring, I mean sure your right about this story having less "world building", but I think the character building makes up for that. Besides he's still a child slave, so in order for there to be a "world building setting" first he's got to get freed. Also may I ask, what made you turn off from this story the most? Was it the protagonist being a child slave?