Review Detail of Jajaiabakabaianaa in One Piece: Blood Unleashed [Revamped - in the synopsis]
Review detail
The beginning is a bit slow but well written in my opinion. I cannot say anything yet about the construction of the world or the development of story as it is still early but I hope it follows a logical and intelligent path. Grammar is good especially for webnovel fanfics. As for Vlad... I don't know what to say but I like it; However I have a question for the devil fruit, will it be one already seen or will it be "invented" by you?
One Piece: Blood Unleashed [Revamped - in the synopsis]
Vostarian
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I just hope it's not a zoan fruit. Zoan fruits suck. Imo they're really lame in comparison to paramecias and logias.
Vostarian:Thanks a lot for the kind words. With regard to his devil fruit, is OC, even now I'm researching cool ways to use his abilities.
how about you make the devil fruit some thing like the float float fruit but you dont have to touch things to flout kinda like telekinesis you could be pain and make things float like shinra tensei by making the air float thus haveing the air in your control and being able to push and pull people or planetary devastation or even enkidu enuma elish you know that move where counteless chains form into one big chain you could do that by tauching the earth thus having control of the earth kinda like how golden lion made a bunch of wind lions you can make wind chain or earth chains to make them stronger
LickSuckEatMyBut:how about you make the devil fruit some thing like the float float fruit but you dont have to touch things to flout kinda like telekinesis you could be pain and make things float like shinra tensei by making the air float thus haveing the air in your control and being able to push and pull people or planetary devastation or even enkidu enuma elish you know that move where counteless chains form into one big chain you could do that by tauching the earth thus having control of the earth kinda like how golden lion made a bunch of wind lions you can make wind chain or earth chains to make them stronger
Damn, I'm really sorry for not noticing those comments under the review. Well, to answer to your hope, the devil fruit will be a paramecia type, Blood-Blood Fruit.
Benjamin_:I just hope it's not a zoan fruit. Zoan fruits suck. Imo they're really lame in comparison to paramecias and logias.
Hmm sorry for not noticing your comment under this review. To answer to your suggestion/comment, the devil fruit abilities that I have in mind will also include a type of telekinesis. The devil fruit is blood-blood, a paramecia type. So in theory, he can control his blood like a Psychic.
LickSuckEatMyBut:how about you make the devil fruit some thing like the float float fruit but you dont have to touch things to flout kinda like telekinesis you could be pain and make things float like shinra tensei by making the air float thus haveing the air in your control and being able to push and pull people or planetary devastation or even enkidu enuma elish you know that move where counteless chains form into one big chain you could do that by tauching the earth thus having control of the earth kinda like how golden lion made a bunch of wind lions you can make wind chain or earth chains to make them stronger
Your correct halfway, the fruit type differs, but ability-wise you're on point. My choice is blood-blood special paramecia. If you're asking me what is the meaning of special paramecia in the fruit, at later stages of MC's power journey (when he awakens his devil fruit) some of his abilities will behave like a logia type, while also having the paramecia abilities.
CodezL:is the damn Vlad the Impaler, it obviously has to be a logia fruit blood.
Vostarian:Your correct halfway, the fruit type differs, but ability-wise you're on point. My choice is blood-blood special paramecia. If you're asking me what is the meaning of special paramecia in the fruit, at later stages of MC's power journey (when he awakens his devil fruit) some of his abilities will behave like a logia type, while also having the paramecia abilities.
So he can regenerate/heal wounds of any type, he can even stick back an amputated limb. However, the only type of wound he can regenerate is the type that destroys his limb. We need to be honest with us. Blood sure can do lots of things, but regenerate a limb from scratch? Maybe if he awakens his devil fruit sure, but until then is a long way.
CodezL:It would be great if that fruit gave him regeneration abilities.
Besides that it would not have to be able to recover the broken bones, but it would be great if it made it possible to rejoin amputated parts, if it were a logia fruit then if it could be that the limbs grow again.
Vostarian:So he can regenerate/heal wounds of any type, he can even stick back an amputated limb. However, the only type of wound he can regenerate is the type that destroys his limb. We need to be honest with us. Blood sure can do lots of things, but regenerate a limb from scratch? Maybe if he awakens his devil fruit sure, but until then is a long way.
He can recover broken bones. Inside bones, there's bone marrow made by blood cells, in a sense blood. They recover with his ability, only destroyed limbs can't be recovered.
CodezL:Besides that it would not have to be able to recover the broken bones, but it would be great if it made it possible to rejoin amputated parts, if it were a logia fruit then if it could be that the limbs grow again.
