Pfff, this is a solid beginning. This is what you call character development. You're really hyping me up for this story. This is a really unique approach to OP. Hope you don't suddenly go on a hiatus or drop this. As an author, I approve of the beginning of this story. Oh and if someone who is reading this, is looking for a better OP story, you can read mine called, One Piece: Finally Free. I'm sorry Morpheus, but I had to shout myself out really quickly. Hope you don't mindđâïž
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