I think the book is written well with interesting characters but what i find missing is the goals of the main character. Why does he want to become stronger? Is it still because of his mother or is there some other reason? He continues to make not the brightest descisions like helping his friend because why?? so that the author can make him a rival which i think is really unnecessary
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