From what I’ve read so far, the general story is interesting and the various power systems are balanced and reasonable, but the writing in general is sort of sub-par. I’m not too sure if the writing quality for the first 50-100 chapters or so carry over into the rest of the story, but the author’s general “flow” of words is a bit awkward. If it wasn’t for my love of these types of books, I would’ve dropped it in the first 5 or 10 chapters. The characters are 2-dimensional. As an example, Malia. The way the author portrays her initally is someone who has a dislike of Jason because of the Soulbond Greg did. But after their eyes meet, she does a 180 and immediately has a positive impression of Jason? Just that part is cliche. I don’t usually keep up to date with updates of any webnovel, so I just rated it five stars. The worldbuilding is great. It’s easy to visualize and understand, but also can be too easy sometimes, even disregarding the show, not tell rule. Finally, the storytelling. I have a positive outlook on any books that involve magical animals and getting stronger through your own means. The story is the defining feature as to why I like this story so much. Minor criticisms here, but some of the decisions Jason decides to make are illogical. I’m not sure if it’s because the author just slipped up there or if he’s trying to portray the fact he has to do things no normal adult would do as a thirteen/fourteen year old. 4 stars. Keeps me from sinking into quarantine boredom. Will update in the future if needed.
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