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LaDiDah
LaDiDahLv144yr
2021-01-20 11:11

Definitely has Omniscient Reader vibes about it, and a really great premise of novels come to life and monster fighting. One of my favorite webnovel tropes, so I am definitey on board for more. Only complaint is some lack of clarity around POV, but it is a really fun read regardless.

HAPPY EVER AFTER

Aeipathy_02
4.8
52 Chs

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Aeipathy_02Author

Oh. Thank you for catching that, I'll definitely fix that. Thanks for the kind review and hope you I could here more of your suggestions 😊😊😊

4yr
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Really an enjoyable read! just my type 😬 About the novel- A well crafted plot line with a spicy concept, mild sprinkles of humouric condiments, delectablely tasty sequence of events paired with freshly grated narratives, finely minced characters combined with palatable personalities and not to forget the appetizing flavours of comdey, mystery, action, system and dainty world building! so yummy 🤤! Good job chef-author!

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Well then, I don't usually read system stories since most of them tend to be, in all honesty, the same thing all the time in every story that uses this, and sometimes the system used is well...not good or it's not used that well by the characters. But that is not the case with this story right here, where the system is used pretty well and makes sense, which is good and in my opinion this is how most of the system novels should be. But let's start with the review proper, first off the world, it's pretty good and suck you right in with everything that happens and makes you want more. As for the characters, they are all pretty good and as of now pretty well written I have no complaints with any of them. Now the writing, it's pretty good there's a few grammatical errors here and there but I won't shame the author as we all make mistakes and it's not something unfixable All in all, pretty good story and I will be coming back for more P.S: if this sounds to vague it's in purpose since I want everyone that reads this review to read the story

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ChowhieTaBatchoy
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I really enjoyed reading this novel❤️❤️❤️ so cool. The twist of the story is very interesting 💕[img=recommend] I think the author of this novel is well-inspired and has fond of imagination.. looking forward for more novels 🥰

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GCarre
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I like how the story goes with the system. The precise items, weapons, and skills are described neatly. It's like being in an RPG game where fantasy and reality blend perfectly. I want to know more about Zash, and the characters, hope you give us more chaps!

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.................. ❤❤❤ 😍😍😍 Beautiful story I love how the author did the story; it really is good and stunning... The synopsis already shows the beauty of the story what more in the chapters... and it's inspired by omniscient reader's viewpoint too! so another reason to read it! I love it ❤❤❤ I will add this to my reading list~~

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Interesting Story. The characters are well around. Its only starting so there could be more home for improvements. This story has a potential so keep it up author.

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Nice story, I like where the event and arc go. The writing is also beautiful. This is a great novel. I can't wait to see where the story goes next[img=recommend]

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A story within the story of a story. Though what I said is confusing, the author does her best to narrate the story in a comedic interesting manner. I had laughs while reading it. The story unfolds with a good pace as details only come when necessary. With fairy tale like quests, the novel seems to promise a great plot. Good work, author!

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