Review Detail of mozza_mello in TALE OF SUPARDS

Ayee! This book has an interesting premise, so that's great! :D To start with, the author has a lot of vocabulary, so I like that! :D But I do think the punctuation could use some work here and there, but it okei :D I'm interested in the characters and what happened to them hehe Great work, author! Looking forward to more! <3