the best thing about the work is that it starts in the era of combatant clans and the MC makes his own village, I can't take any more fanfic that goes on in konoha, the worst thing about the work was probably preventing the birth of mei terumi, my wife mei terumi, my love mei, we will always be together, one day this MC villain paid a price for committing such evil

REASONS TO READ THIS 0)Progression is paced perfectly for the scenario 1) Very realistic on war, no BS good vs evil bashing, portrays how grey it is (no black or white) 2) No system or status bullshit with rewards, starter packs, bloodlines and all that crap 3) MC in general is pretty cool and not a pathetic beta cuck who remains indecisive 4)conversations are natural, I've read a lot of fanfics where MC is always joking and makes me cringe with the forced comedy by never taking himself seriously or has some psychological trauma from first life which takes 100 chapters to get over but is still lingering( i dont like it and thats a personal preference)

great story mc is op and don't drop this or I'll Rasengan you! like this ------------(\__/) ------------( •_ •) ------------/>🌀 Rasengan!!!

Shameless Author, but anyways please tell me what you think of the story and if you have any questions or requests please tell me I would be glad to help you

4.5 stars -2 stars = for saying that in the era of clans in wars the training started at 11, if it had been like this hashirama would not have done konoha. Konoha starts because the children would go to war at the age of 5 and could not live longer than 10, you would be amazing if you live until 20 and 30 you were a hiruzen

1.The writing isnt at the level it should be. 2.The Plot is kinda garbage with him only having about 3 to 5 Battles that meant anything in like 30 chapters. 3.Too many Chapters without meaning at all like wtf, example is the Elders chapter where he doesnt even show anything besides who they are and i think thats just a chapter he made beacuse the author was lazy and thought that he could just do it whatever. 4. The author says FANFIC LOGIC LOL whenever its something that doesnt make sense. Well let me tell you that thats not true for Good fanfictions and even if Naruto is a fiction novel, it still has borders and just breaking them makes this a whishy washy story , that 1st: Doesnt make sense at all, 2nd: Its just made on a whim so yeah, no offese but its crap. 5Th: I dont feel the emotions of the character and mind i tell you that even gamers mind doesnt make a character a blank that doesnt care about anything at all and its just like a 2 dimensional character that i can never imagine being real. ----------------------------------------------------------- Now all that aside, its a new work and as a maybe new author, its not a half bad for a first time thing. I dont want to hear all that bullshit about why dont you just make it yourself, beacuse i am just giving a review of my opinion and mine alone so i hope you dont take too much offense. Thats all thanks for reading. Deadpool.

The sense of progression is awful. With one finger this guy beats Madara the guy Kishimoto was sitting down having nightmares on how to kill. Just another 14 year old power trip. My guy became clan head and hokage at 13 OK. This is a DISGRACE to the original. the Battels are bland and trash. Dialog that makes you think you've had better conversations with your Deceased Great grandfather. my Dog has better conversation skills then this. If you like senseless power trips this is the book for you. If you do not snort alcohol and sharpie pens and would like to maintain your brain cells keep in moving. Author before you write another chapter of this SEIZURE INDUCING GARBAGE go on YouTube and search up how to write a convincing story, building characters, writing conflict, and engaging dialog. But let me guess your just doing this for fun an its a self indulgence fantasy ill assume my advice was not heard, seeing the ratings these sharpie snorters have giving you you'll be comfortable with mediocrity .

4 stars just for idea. ur chps are too short, [ though its fine if current update rate is permeant ], MC is too weak, The clan itself working is too weak. -- I agree that its stupid to send young kids to war early, that is fine but them only training at 10 is retarded cause clan kids trained since 5 yr old in cannon. in war era obviously it'd be younger. that is stupid [ them training late, not them sending kids to war---its fine ]. ur mc is weak...Abilities- eternal youth, Gamer mind, Gamer body, Great Chakra Control, Memories Of Past And New Life ] gamer mind and body are hax..not OP but hax..these shit should make MC OP in moments especially combined with the other shit like memories and GCC. matter of fact GCC is probably the strongest [ minus hax ] cause its the only thing in naruto that allows someone to match people with monster chakra lvl [ minus 8 gate ]. and if he has memories...he already better than everyone. my point is all the shit MC has makes him OP very very easily. -- explore clan more, and give purpose to MC and shit cause he bland and so is story , , GL

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