I have read up to chapter 25 so I can't say for the whole novel if it went better. The novel is completed with only 450 chapters. The novel just isn't that interesting enough for me to waste my time to read that much chapters. This is the main problem with this novel. It is tiresome to read which leads to to the audience tired to invest time in reading this novel. There is also the common problem with the dialogues. The medium of the novel is the writing. We can't see how they talk but can only imagine it with how the author writes. Having overreaction and unrealistic dialogues makes the characters in the novel dumber and makes you imagine that they have screw loose. It tried to be comedic but just failed. This won't gather enough readers to make it viable to translate especially with how much chapters it only have.
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