interesting story and world building. but I think the story assumes a lot of things at the start like the fact that there is mortal plane and cultivation plane.and he was a spoiled rich kid who suddenly has enough stamina to do blacksmithing, initial few missions should've been about exercising then story should've introduced how blacksmithing works like different stages and functions of different equipment in the workshop
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