I feel it is a bit too smooth. The MC always makes it just in time to save the day. Its just a bit too unrealistic how everything just magicaly works out every time. I also think the cheat was too OP for the story setting. The whole doomsday bunker theme is a bit cliche/used/tired/done. If you are going to do a cliche story like that, you have to at least do it well, and put your own spin onto it. I will not continue reading this novel.
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