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Heart59
Heart59Lv23yrHeart59

Hi there, just wanted to say that your book is really interesting! I also think that it’s better if each chapter is composed of both paragraphs and dialogues. That was once my mistake too! A lot of people have told me to not make it all dialogue! Don’t worry, I’ll still keep supporting your book! Excellent work![img=recommend]

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Fragrance of jealousy

Ishita_Khanna

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Ishita_Khanna
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Thank you so much for reading the book and giving me review . I'll try my best to do as you said . Thanks for the help. Hope you like other chapters of the book also in the future and keep supporting the book [img=recommend]

Heart59
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Of course! I really enjoy reading it! Mistakes makes us better! I hope that my review wasn’t that offensive. I just wanted to give you tips since I have friends who are authors too. Also, if you have time, kindly check out my new book! Thanks!

Ishita_Khanna:Thank you so much for reading the book and giving me review . I'll try my best to do as you said . Thanks for the help. Hope you like other chapters of the book also in the future and keep supporting the book [img=recommend]