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Mao_Yuxuan
Mao_YuxuanLv43yr
2021-01-17 15:00

Okay, okay, okay ... first I'm gonna say that this book made me laugh so much lol. I love how the author writes his words. It's truly fun. Actually, I wasn't focused on the diction but focused on the dialogues. Ha ha ha ha Well, there are some grammatical mistakes. The mistakes are often made — but not major. The character development is quite good. The plot is also very easy to understand. Overall... INTERESTING. I enjoyed it, tho! keep it up!

Narcissus's Nightmare

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Faysal_Ahmed_5058
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Good book with very nice and expressive narrative. Only five chapter. You can finish it in one go. Nice work author. Hope you write more quickly.

3yr

LaDiDah
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I feel like it must have been fun to write this piece, like just going all out on the most unlikeable person on the planet and then that ending just... boop. I enjoyed it. Quick, funny, and light.

3yr
Gaureeey
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UPSIDES - super short, attainable and understandable, its one of those books that u need to read in ur fun-time and wont be disappoiinnnnteddd! smooth ! DOWNSIDES -its super short!! Which i completely hate ngl! i need u to update more chapters whenever possible, needs a little formatting, ALSO ERNESTO NEEDS A PET NAME THIS SOUNDS LIKE A GANG LEADER OR SOMETHING LIKE 'PABLO ESCOBAR' LOL

3yr
Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

Wow first review! This story is lit! I canxt help but be awed! The author's name though...hahahha[img=recommend]Only the ones who can understand can relate. By the way, it was refreshing to see my fellows who write here.....I am really proud of you.

3yr
mozza_mello
mozza_melloLv3

I finished this book in one sitting, and let me say this: it was great and enjoyable! :D First, the premise is simple, but interesting. And of course, well-executed with all the descriptive phrases the author used. Humorous, also, hehe! And the use of first-person POV here is perfect, absolutely immersive for this type of story. I like it! :D The thing is tho, I personally think the use of "..." punctuation is a bit excessive. It's nice in a few places to set up the mood, but I think it could be less. Keep in mind it's just a personal preference tho, so I'll still give a full star review! <3

3yr
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