Review Detail of InfiniteUniversal in Level 524

Hello, author here! I made a mistake during the publishing of this story. Details are in the synopis. Anyway, this is the compulsory author review. I worked really hard on it, including the cover. Im not the best artist, but I figure it looks okay. The story in comparision is much better. There shouldn’t be any spelling or grammar mistakes, but if there are, please tell me. Enjoy!