Review Detail of TheWoodsman in The World of Cards

Shameless author review! I plan to make this novel 500+ chapters, so I'm in it for the long haul. I'm a new writer so give me tips, also ideas of things you want to see. There will be a dual plot/parallel side story with the prince, so don't get turned off by the first few chaps. The book's cover is the Tarot or Major Arcana called the fool, which signifies the beginning of a great journey. I hope you'll be with me the whole way!! [img=recommend]