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Nekoman
NekomanLv23yr
2021-02-11 12:29

some punctuation mistakes and some grammar mistakes I noticed are not that big of an impact to the story nonetheless, this book is good, great. Very detailed in words, character design and world background. Thoughx updating stability can be improved

Cold Blooded Princess

cutelit4ever
4.7
122 Chs

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cutelit4ever
cutelit4everLv12

Ehhh??? okay okay... I will try my best 😅 thank you 🥰❤

3yr
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Afolabi_Mubarak
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Nice! The narrative is an interesting and action-packed one. The characters are well rounded. The grammar is on point too. Kudos to the author.

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DefinitelyAHuman
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lachancla666
lachancla666Lv2

Great story. Starts off high in action. Author has a great writing style and way of building the suspense of the action. MC seems pretty mysterious as well.

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hermeneutic_rapier
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Thrilling and action packed. Very entertaining for those people who wants to have some spice on their boring romance reading life. 😅 kudos writer. Keep it up.. 👍

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Hajra_N
Hajra_NLv3

I love how you designed the characters. Most of the time our lives change but if we don't take control life ends up changing us sometimes even to all sorts of worst kinds. You got everything well portrayed. Keep it up!

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Korriberg
KorribergLv14

Sounds interesting and kinda hooked me, not enough though to gloss over the grammatical mistakes. I'll probably be back once the story has been proofread. A grammar check would really help. besides that it sounds pretty interesting. I'm just a stickler for spelling/grammatical correctness in the stuff I read. Even if my own English is flawed, not my first language. Should the grammar improve dramatically in the later chapters, please let me know so I can continue reading!

3yr
Caizer_101
Caizer_101Lv1

Well, I will give 5 stars to the author... I like how she made the world itself, and how fun the character is... The identity of Elena and her past, and the situation. The feeling that I thought I already know what will happen next but then it is different. The mystery, makes you want to dwell more, and the unexpected truth in volume one, and the twist. Truly amazing. Although there are some grammar and some spelling that needs to fix, nevertheless it affects the story... All in all, I love it. Ben fatto!

3yr
Lancee
LanceeLv1

This story is well written. I haven't read something so good for a while. The storyline develops well throughout and the picture created is fascinating. Overall this is a great book.

3yr
Shanique_Mahbeir_3863
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Honestly never knew that I could be so invested in a book before. It is so amazingly structured and I love the way that the author writes! Highly recommended.

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