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MUHACHE_JUMA
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2021-01-15 17:41

You've got a great synopsis over there. From the first chapter, you were able to craftly outline what the book will be about. I can tell that there would be a lot of action and death not forgetting betrayal. Nice work buddy!

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Bort_Patgia
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Thank you. Please, also read the sequel of this

MUHACHE_JUMA
MUHACHE_JUMALv13

what's the title?

Bort_Patgia
Bort_PatgiaLv2

It will be release next week (I think). The title is Jaeger. A character from this novel will crossover on Jaeger.

Bort_Patgia
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https://***.webnovel.com/book/jaeger_19134788506543305

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