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2021-03-25 22:41

I never be a big fan of bullyinh or will even consider a bully is handsome, damn I am not sadomasochist. So, I am not happy with the way the author try to justify the male lead, like he did his bullying in his young age (he was 18, hallo) and that he really into her now not because she is a beauty. Also, that he never get reprimanded and take a consequences is beyond believe. Make me wonder if the author really knows the psychology impact of bullying and public humiliation. Author did mention about it but didn't have depthness on it. I reqlly don't understand hiw he can get away from accountability and worst the author tried to make him like cool, rich and many women falls for him. Well has what he had done being exposed? see if there are still many who will think he is cool unless you are bunch of psycho. It will be more believable if you still made the female lead as fat and looks normal doesn't have to be such a beauty and he falls for her. On the female lead, she is the epitome of a beauty who put her dignity down there. I can't believe she falls for him. He was a bullybthat alone already tells what kind of a person he is, he admitted he first falls for her beauty, that alone tells how cheap he is and she still likes him?. Even a slut can still have a dignity Well at the end, this a novel that is not written well in the development. Pass.

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Thank you so much for your honest review! I am sorry that this book didn't meet your standards.I wrote this book at a young age so I don't really know much about it but I will improve my writing skills. Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate it 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻 Have a nice reading!

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