Review Detail of Akira_Monadelle in The Lawes Girl

This was a good read. The synopsis gave little away but it was enough to make things interesting and intriguing. The plot is cliche and quite common, but the author did a good job making their novel unique. The novel had quite a few errors in grammar, punctuation and wording but nothing too too major to adversely affect the novel. I liked the novel but some paragraphs were way too long. It was a major turnoff while reading, long paragraphs just aren't attractive. Overall, the novel has potential despite the setbacks. This is actually the shortest completed novel I've ever read lol. [img=recommend]