Review Detail of Leigh_Green in The Lawes Girl

This is a nice read. I wouldn't call it a romance just so yet between Lucille and Nick. Wasn't that more of a hook-up? 😁 Though I'd love how they will develop a deeper relationship to each other. Writing is good. But I hope you will chunk your long paragraphs into smaller ones. It's kinda long to read it The pace is a tad bit slow but okay. The characters are very close close to each other what with the FL being a sweet little princess with a temper of her own. Overall, good work.