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DaoistgrDFOq
DaoistgrDFOqLv13yr
2021-03-19 04:28

No comments. Jk. this is one of the most interesting stories I've read. I like the twist and turns at every point in time. I recommend it. Keep it up

Don't Let Me Down.

shirley_amengor
4.0
49 Chs

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

The chapters are decent and were understandable. Although it can still be improved with its descriptions. But still, the narrations are decent and legit. I can still feel that it has story potential exceeding the narration's quality. The development were there and it was nice to accompany the MC all throughout the story. Kudos for a nice story and good luck in the future. Here's a five stars to brighten up your day. ✨

3yr

Princess_debbs26
Princess_debbs26Lv1

The characters and setting of this book are so realistic, the story development is okay, there is so much mystery to attract a mystery lover. Good work author.

3yr
Novelcat_Wind
Novelcat_WindLv1

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Awura_Ama_2284
Awura_Ama_2284Lv1

The current charter are intriguing. And I look forward to more updates. Overall it is a very good story by my standards 🙂 and it needs more hype. Great work

3yr
Kelly_Reuben
Kelly_ReubenLv1

Story plot is good, and the characters seem realistic so I have no problem with the book the updatiy stability is where my problems lies with

3yr
DaoistUJx9E7
DaoistUJx9E7Lv1

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Nana_Ama101
Nana_Ama101Lv1

Hello, It is me the author of this book I just wanted to tell you all that for some reason even after I publish a new chapter "ANNOUNCEMENT" seems to be the latest chapter release so please don't think I haven't updated the story I update every week. Thanks

3yr
Ultimatedaywriter
UltimatedaywriterLv4

Romance isn't really my thing but the writing was good. The mystery is enough of a hook to keep me reading. The characters are very real and down to earth. Sometimes that's a breath of fresh air between the reality ending gaming systems and grinding to level infinity.

3yr
boryz
boryzLv12

Very good plot, well-written characters. The twists are very good and I like them. Overall, I like the novel until I read it, although it's not my favorite genre. Keep it up.

3yr
Mediocre_author
Mediocre_authorLv1

It's great! My only suggestion would be to use contractions such as "can't", or "won't" to make it seem more personal. It can also be a bit repetitive at times, especially in the first chapter, there's a huge emphasis on how tiring work is and how tired the main character is.

3yr
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