The build of the world is great. I like the way how you're very descriptive with the places and actions. The flow of the story is awesome I like how you construct your words though there were some grammatical errors here and there that's okay as you can know that you have more room to improve. I'll definitely continue reading your work. It interests me very much. Waiting for updates. [img=update][img=recommend]
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