Review Detail of Bylunarose in Dreams and Ashes

I enjoyed the way the backgrounds and things are described. It really helps imagine what your trying to portray. I also happen to like Tristian a bit more than the lead character lol. Although I did catch some grammar mistakes nothing bad enough to make the story unreadable and I think the story goes at a fast pace but not too fast to be like 'woah'. Overall it was good though and you should keep it up.