Review Detail of LadyLipstick in Quick transmigration But I write the smut scenes!

First of all, I feel honored that someone wrote a different version of my story 🙈 I really don't know how to write smut, how to go about it. I don't know how to write it (or any scene in general for that matter) in a "colorful" way that's why my writing is more direct and like a semi-script, but this author managed to do it. Kudos to you author! You write better than me 😆 I enjoyed reading even though there're only 2 chapters released. Please do continue!! I want to read more!! 😆