Review Detail of Novel_Dumre in REGRETFUL (TBATE FANFIC)

Item: REGRETFUL (TBATE FANFIC)
Rating: 1.6

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Novel_DumreLv31yrNovel_Dumre

This book needs some serious TLC! If only I knew which comic, anime, or other source this story was based off of, then I'd be able to recognize the world around the twins. But right now, it's missing a lot of the details that would make it great. With a bit of work and dedication, I can definitely see the potential here!

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Moe_Moe_9274

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Moe_Moe_9274AuthorMoe_Moe_9274

ur the first comment! U get a pin! I don't know what TCL means but the manga this is about is called "THe beginning after the end" and Arthur is the main character he reincarnated after being betrayed. I made up his twin brother. You shoudl read the manga its not bad.

1yr

Moe_Moe_9274AuthorMoe_Moe_9274

Also Now I understand that when writing a fanfic you have to write it as if the person reading hasn't read the story the fanfic is about. I just thought that if you read a fanfic you would have already read the story that is being written as a fanfic.

1yr

Novel_DumreLv3Novel_Dumre

I will definitely give the manga a look, I have been looking for one lately, thank you

Moe_Moe_9274:ur the first comment! U get a pin! I don't know what TCL means but the manga this is about is called "THe beginning after the end" and Arthur is the main character he reincarnated after being betrayed. I made up his twin brother. You shoudl read the manga its not bad.

1yr

Novel_DumreLv3Novel_Dumre

Not usually, if you write in the synopsis which manga it is from, then most fan will know about it, but it also good to add some description to your writing.

Moe_Moe_9274:Also Now I understand that when writing a fanfic you have to write it as if the person reading hasn't read the story the fanfic is about. I just thought that if you read a fanfic you would have already read the story that is being written as a fanfic.

1yr