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Let me say this. great plot but there is a gramatical error in every paragraph if you dont mind reading a masterpeice with tons of error(when i mean a lot i really do mean a lot) go ahead and read. And money in the novel has a lot of loop holes sometimes gold has a lot of value then next it has little. Like when albo used a few silver coins to get in the acadamy was exagerated then he needs 1.5 million Gold to buy a house. Also power too he made being king Rank a big deal at the start then notices everyone to be king rank

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Revenge of the outcast

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thank you for your review , as the story progresses I will try to maintain the flow And also about the mistakes , I'm quite careless so I make a lots of mistake .Hope I will try to see to this problem . Thank you for reading (;^ω^)