Review Detail of Gaureeey in At Last I Found You In My World

Hi ! I love the premise and the characters, i've read stories like these before but the style of romanticism in your book is what strikes me. Kudos to you for uploading so many chapters at one go ! I want you to focus more on- -Descriptives as it helps the reader imagine better -Use ProWriting or Grammarly to correct sentence structures -Provide Character sketches Please just take it as feedback, i will be re reading the novel once again and reviewing once changes are made, its not criticism, its only to help you grow! ^-^