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Noname_nobodyLv21yr
2023-07-10 18:41

Disclaimer: I’ve read only 21 chapters, so mb it isn’t really accurate. I also used some google translated sentences, because english isn’t my first language(even not second 🀌🏻) β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€” MC is good build character with emotions, but he have head on his shoulders. Also isn’t intellectual God and need to study to become better. Know his past life and motivated to become better, to be accurate πŸ™‚ I gain EU4 and Emperor Prince(first chapters, because after author became stupid and start thinking that political marriage is for idiots) wibe when reading this book. Lore is our Europe without magic(c’mon we see white-haired and silver-eyed people every day) and mb some AU, but it’s fine. Story is slow and I want some time skips after all, but story well thought out so as not to cause boredom. Time is about industrialization and fast growing progress, so if you want to improve your country you need some education in University in that sphere. What about minuses? Well, after 21 chapter there are about 0 minuses, so I can’t write smth that not exist.

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Roasin
RoasinAuthor

Why I deeply thank you for the review I would like you to point out where I went stupid and thought that political marriage is for idiots? The only think I remember is that I stated that a lot of nobles dislike it,becouse most of the time it is loveless afair ,but they still do it becouse it is expected from them.heck Maria Carolina a sister of Marie cried when she found out that she would have to marry Ferdinand IV of Naples saying that neapolitan marriages were unlucky. She even openly stated that she finds her husband to be ugly and even slept in seperate chembers yet as is her duty as a wife she gave him eighteen children, of whom seven survived into adulthood

jmwilliamsart
jmwilliamsartLv13

Do you think that Louis could help arrange for Marie’s sister to divorce Frederick and re-marry some other nobleman who she loves, a single man of course?

Roasin:Why I deeply thank you for the review I would like you to point out where I went stupid and thought that political marriage is for idiots? The only think I remember is that I stated that a lot of nobles dislike it,becouse most of the time it is loveless afair ,but they still do it becouse it is expected from them.heck Maria Carolina a sister of Marie cried when she found out that she would have to marry Ferdinand IV of Naples saying that neapolitan marriages were unlucky. She even openly stated that she finds her husband to be ugly and even slept in seperate chembers yet as is her duty as a wife she gave him eighteen children, of whom seven survived into adulthood
Roasin
RoasinAuthor

Maybe if he became emperor of HRE or a King of naples or Austria.

jmwilliamsart:Do you think that Louis could help arrange for Marie’s sister to divorce Frederick and re-marry some other nobleman who she loves, a single man of course?
jmwilliamsart
jmwilliamsartLv13

I hope that you intend to continue with this story?

Roasin:Maybe if he became emperor of HRE or a King of naples or Austria.
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