Awesome Novel. Your writing quality is good and is very easy to read. I hope that you would just make it normal when someone is conversing. Instead of putting their names at the end, you could have just mentioned it as 'He/She said.' Although your writing style looks unique, some readers won't prefer that. Your story has a lot of potentials, so try polishing it and it will turn into a hidden gem one day!
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