webnovel
avatar

Review Detail of Ak02 in Magic Force

Review detail

Ak02
Ak02Lv123yrAk02

Awesome Novel. Your writing quality is good and is very easy to read. I hope that you would just make it normal when someone is conversing. Instead of putting their names at the end, you could have just mentioned it as 'He/She said.' Although your writing style looks unique, some readers won't prefer that. Your story has a lot of potentials, so try polishing it and it will turn into a hidden gem one day!

altalt

Magic Force

Lua_Kai

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!