Review Detail of mozza_mello in Magic Force

Amazing aye! :D First off, the writing is great, with few to no mistakes hehe! <3 I would suggest writing who's speaking like "he/she said" instead of using "(name)", but that's totally optional and subjective hehe! :D For updates, no complaints here, good job! :D The concept itself is very interesting to me, exactly my cup of tea lol, destruction, war, and humanity on the brink of extinction, but with magic! Chef's kiss! :D The characters are also fleshed-out and unique, so me likey! For world-building, absolutely great ayeee, would love to know more about what will happen hehe! Great job, author! <3