Ok. I've read till the last chapters, here we go. First of all, WARNING TO NEW READERS: You'll have a lot of things to ignore on the first chapters. The emotes rarify themselves a lot on the latest chapters so that's one good thing, and he stops pressing enter at the end of every sentence too. So HAVE HOPE! That's the only critical flaws I found writing-wise. Story development-wise, I won't say it's the best I've ever seen, and I mean the man calls himself the trolling master so I mean yea... The POV are sometimes all over the place, and there's little things you could nitpick, but overall, I'll say it and I have pretty high standards, the story was enjoyable. Came here after reading Yggdrasil's pupil, so I knew it was gonna get better. I was right! It does get better. The carefree style of the author stays, but at least you understand what's happening, and how hilarious it is ;) The world-building makes out a pretty dark world, outlining the naïve character of the MC. Naïve, but not stupid, though! Sometimes, I was shocked by how creative the MC's plan were. He just bad at talking to people, leading to lots of misunderstandings. In short, read it ;)
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