Review Detail of samsara in The Unnamed God. I'm really Not a God You Guys !
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i kept reading and expecting to understand it but still failed. too bad a writing if the readers don't get it.
The Unnamed God. I'm really Not a God You Guys !
Zombie
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i read till the seventh chapter...... maybe i am not used to the weird writing style, sudden change, pov.....
Zombie:How many chapters did you read? What is making you confused? Please be specific in your feedback before giving a bad review. I've heard it can be surprising at first, but readers usually get used to the weird writing style fast.
Ok here are a few tricks : POV is always announced by **** (POV) at the beginning. Otherwise, always assume it is from MC point of view. All the random thoughts describe what is happening around him. From time to time there will be dialogue lines marked by either "." or [.]. MC only ever speaks using [] (same for the Lunar goddess). All other characters (so far) use "." instead. I made sure there is always a way to know for sure who is speaking (either from the wording used or because of "." / [.]) For example, characters refer to MC by various titles, one calls him my lord, the other envoy, the other slave, the other sectmaster, etc. Try reading again keeping these tips in mind and it should help đ Tell me what you think afterward ;)
