Magical review, teleporting thru time, space and novels ;) I've spotted some grammatical mistakes along the way, sometimes sentences are constructed in a weird way making it hard to understand at first. Story is developing nicely, dialogues and characters are written perfectly giving you the feel of the character. Interactions between our mc and Mina is giving me this nice bubbly feeling
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LIKEEarphoneSnipa:The funny thing is, you said this last time but still appropriate the praise( screw that grammatical stuff)