Item: Cold Hearted Devil Fell In Love
Rating: 5
Author: Devanne_Chin

Devanne_ChinLv151yr

2023-12-23 21:28

Overall the story was short sweet and to the point. The FL was not weak which I appreciate and both characters compliment each other. I would say job well done.

Cold Hearted Devil Fell In Love

xAlexiax

4.8

172 Chs

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LittlepunnieLv3

Hello! I'm curious about the female lead's background, reminds me of Ning Xi, and the male lead kinda reminds me of Jin Liwei, so it's a plus point :wink. Your writing style was lined with 'on spot ' and no to dilly-dallying. There were minimal errors in terms of grammar and capitalization. I suggest you to hand in some transition words? It will help your book to be flowy! I've only read 6 chapters , so I am not profound with concluding about the story development. Anyways, the story plot was, wow. You made me read it with your own unique style of expressing your story. ( By the way, I would like to advice you in writing the expressions, and the tone of voice for your characters? Minimal but not lacking. But overall, goodies(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤!) There were some parts where I was confused but, then again, I was back on track bbecause, it really was quite intriguing. I am hoping to know more about the female lead Ivy, and Noah! Also, I'm hoping- hoping- to read some spicy love triangle ( if there are ) since Ivy's personality kinda makes everyone be well and open to her. She is a sunny, domineering lady in my eyes adorned with glasses XD. This is a MUST read! I'll look forward to your journey as a writer! (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤

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latteectrieLv3

Well, what can I say about this book? Very likeable, smart, strong FL ʕง•ᴥ•ʔง Cold ML (but not for our Ivy) ʕ ˵• ₒ •˵ ʔ I can't wait to see how this further develops... I hope that Ivy and Noah will have beautiful relationship in the future as well. Ah and I waiting for smut chapters! HE HE.

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Daoistvd2TNFLv10

love it thank u for such beautiful write up just loved reading the book a big thank you author would like to read more if you r are publishing more books

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IrishCerberusLv2

Ivy is a strong female lead, she's so fiesty to the male lead. male lead is cold hearted ceo but only warm to ivy. No ra*e and any misunderstandings are quickly sorted. Well done author 👏 I look forward to reading more 👍

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Krishna_1999Lv13

I read the novel and just love both Noah and Ivy they are just perfect couple ❤️❤️ And love the novel part that it's complete not hanging me in midway💙💙

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Debbe_PhillipsLv15

So this story is one i stumBled across and i tell what it was worth the time and coins i love it and if you the chance to read it please it’s worth it

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jafr86Lv15

This is my second review I am now current to the latest chapter. I really enjoyed this novel because the writing is smoothly done and its a novel you can just sit done and enjoy from being to end in a single sitting. The FL and ML are well characterized along with the plot being exciting and the story only get better with each chapter. The novel is now at 100 plus chapters and the characters are getting really fleshed out especially the FL which makes this a perfect time to start following this story before its too far in the chapter count.

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MisumiLv1

awesome female lead very fierce and bold...sometimes crazier than expected but the devil balances her flames with his ice!!!! great work!!!!!!!!!!!

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Your story is the very first romance novel that had me reading for so long. Grammar seems fine but needs more. You have a great story plot and a fine MC.

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