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oVahpowAh
oVahpowAhLv12yr
2022-02-04 14:00

I find it hard to believe that the MC at peak mana control realm can't suppress with his aura alone the soldiers of wu kingdom in the mist forest who were part of soldiers who hurt meiyi who were just meager qi realm and the commander is probably only at early mana perception realm despite mc being enrage why is that? When a bad guy has higher realm , they can suppress thier enemy with aura alone but the mc don't? And why is he always late? When the elf queen is starting to battle allaina , seth is already near and he only took action when the queen is nearly dying going for the tree. As if you pause the whole world when you're writing a battle scene only focusing the time on battle. I mean seth should be already moving towards the tree to weaken allaina and yet he seems to just stood like an idiot watching the fight. And this kind of thing happens all the time making some kind of hero saving the day. Seriously! Stop that kind of BS!

Corrupt Creations

DanTeNL
4.7
439 Chs

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oVahpowAh
oVahpowAhLv1

The novel has good potential but it's depressing as cuz the mc is always the underdog and his girls are always in trouble as if the covid pandemic ain't depressing enough , the novel make you depressed even more... *sigh*

2yr
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Cristiano_Araujo
Cristiano_AraujoLv1

This novel is very good. I was impressed when i realized that depth of the story. The characters are well-designed and the Mc is very interesting too. I will certainly read until the end and add it to my library.

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LonelyAtPeak
LonelyAtPeakLv4

Well nice book . But author can you let girls live peacefully and let them less prone to danger of getting them defiled it will be good , what you write more cliche scenes .

3yr
SecretWolf
SecretWolfLv3

This is very interesting and one of the most imaginative and best stories in here, the plot is interesting, the characters are great, the women in the story is wonderful and the story and plot is very well done. Keep up the great work. If you are interested in this book just read 30+ chapter you will like it, if you are a fan of the tags. The pacing of story and characters are well done that I could not find any negative things to say about this novel.

3yr
jaum_joa
jaum_joaLv3

This story is incredible. The characters are developing in a very bring and clean manner while the plost seems to be deep. It is impressive the quaily of everything and i will certainly keep reading.

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Deaboro
DeaboroLv12

Reveal spoiler

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William_Fukushima
William_FukushimaLv1

something very interesting, it manages to hold you to a point where it makes you want to know the continuity. I have good hopes for him. congratulations

3yr
Yarakiri
YarakiriLv14

Frankly nothing extraordinary, it's not bad but nothing convincing (I imagine that it is the author who deletes the bad comments...). Coincidences to no longer want, horrific timings, a story that evolves according to the problems of the women of the MC. Woman who by the way can no longer be counted, well you're going to tell me, maybe there has to be one more each time otherwise the story couldn't move forward... No seriously too much, it's just too much. If I could say the only positive point that made me reach chapter 173, it was the personality of the mc that I liked, even if very far from being perfect, we are painted a fairly intelligent personality, so that at the end up doing actions without too much sense. Read it if you just don't want to worry.

2yr
Ghghgy
GhghgyLv10

Everything is pretty good but too many of clichés and reused themes, that makes it somewhat dull. Otherwise its a good read if someone is new to webnovel.

3yr
DZsTheOnlyWay
DZsTheOnlyWayLv13

do u have a discord?? btw i love this story! -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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