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this is interesting.... what will he do to Luffy? you might as well reincarnate him as Luffy but more mature and smartπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Paradox_AuthorParadox_

Honestly I did think of doing that but I didnt want to mess up his personality, nor did I want to end up retelling the plot that already exists. I wanted another perspective to One Piece with my own wish-fulfilment included. I also wanted to include my own DF idea so I ended up going with and OC. Thanks for the review!

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Admiral_KizaruLv2Admiral_Kizaru

meh, reincarnated as luffy? what a boring idea

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PsyLoRDLv5PsyLoRD

That's a shit idea. Reincarnating as the MC always sucks. Going for the secondary/side characters or something like that is way better